Weakness

1. The towering volumes of “marble and glass” and brushed “brushed steel side-panels” of the escalator create an elegant and ornate atmosphere.http://contemplationsxjones.blogspot.com/

This person repeated the word "brushed."

2. That is a strong case that shows even though Salinger may be straight forward on some things, the verbal irony can create an interesting diction.
http://bradey.blogspot.com/
This person talks from past to present tense.

3. The language used in the excerpt, “Catcher in the Rye” by J. D. Salinger, parades a blatant malicious cordialness.
http://wowfaktor.blogspot.com/
I think that the last three words are too adjective-y. I don't understand what they mean.

4. This suggests that Holden Caulfield is somewhat uneducated, rouge, and ignorant of the facts of life.
http://bookwormsfiresidereading.blogspot.com/2011/10/close-reading.html
"This suggests that..."